(Kenny=the one who's up to no good ,he don't know me) (I=the main character in the story)
Chapter 1: The Story Begins
Long ago......but not so long ago......maybe a few days ago...maybe yesterday....NO!!maybe last week..(Kenny:Enough with the time....just get to the point already!!!! Okay!!!!!)What time ago,(K:=.=")I went camping with Boon Kit , Zen Chiag , Zhong Sim , Christopher , Wei Keong , Chee Wei , Wei Sheng......(K:did they?? when??).....When(K:OKAY!!enough with chapter one...!!CHAPTER 2!!!!!)
Chapter 2:The REAL story begins....
Chapter 3:The house.....
In that night,i told every body to look at the house..they did..the house is there!!!they think it's already there...(K:it is stupid winnie!!! where's the action part??!!)..so they went back to their tent....The next morning I called them to find the house...the house is gone!! they finally believe me!!its really freaky here(K:no its not, u chicken, live here!!)...so we changed our camping place....we moved to another forest..we set our camp beside a shallow river , we had a safe camp for a day,But,we thought the creepy house is gone but its not...its still following us!!!(K:the house can walk??)Wei Keong and Chee Wei decided to go in the house to have a look...!! That night ,they really went in to the house......we waited for about three hours but they haven't came back!!Me and Zhong went searching for them...(K:QUIT IT!!!!! Y CHAPTER 3 IS SO LONG??!!CHAPTER 4!!NOW!!)
Chapter 4:Escape the forest
We reached the door and about to open the door....but the door is locked...when we're just about to give up....the door suddenly opened itself!!!(K:it an automatic door u dumb!!)...i walked forward a step and the house puked some bone out!!"is this Wei Keong's bone??"i asked...(K:YAY!!! he's dead!!!i'm out of my misery!!)But Chee Wei came out alive "Wei Keong is dead!!t-this i-is he's b-bones" Chee Wei said...."OH MY LORD OF CHEESES!!!!!!"(K:oh ur mama psycho!!!)"R-RUN!!!!!" Zhong screamed loudly!!!!!Fortunately,we ran fast so we're able to escape..but for Chee Wei..(K:poor Chee Wei...4 more survivors)I told everybody about what had happen...they panicked and quickly pack their things and ran away.........(K:okay!okay!!u escaped the forest and came out alive....!!!!CHAPTER 5!!!)
Chapter 5:home sweet home...
At school....Christopher wants to tell our teacher what had happened...Luckily,Kit Caught Christopher and said.... "We must keep that as a secret.." said Kit... After school i walked home as usual....but today i saw someone strange and he's wearing a tuxedo...with a hat!!the man said "come my boy..."then i did what he command me to do...."Did you saw a house that keeps following you??" the man asked...."Y-Yes i..... d-did"i replied...."who are y-you how did you k-know??" i aske...."Well.....i'm the ghost hunter...Mr Adam!!" he replied...(K:more like Mr.Chicken MC sissy gay....).."Help me boy...help me to catch the ghost..." he said..."O-Okay......(phew sleepy..!!!enough!!continue....next time kid!!)
To Be Continue....(Beat it kid!!!)
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